I think you should copy & paste the new lines you made, so we can see, and decide if download it or not.
I am the bringer of death, and my bringing begins... now.....
Welcome to the Black Parade!
I shall dance upon the rotting bodies of those who have betrayed me. And how I shall do so!
All aboard the train to hell!
Blood is thicker than oil.
Death awaits those who wander through the devil's playground.....
I have seen all that has passed from life. It is fucked up, and It is delightful.